Comments : Lesson In Love

  • 18 years ago

    by EmptyEyes

    That was a really sweet poem. The way you wrote it was great. todays valentines day and i guess its the perfect poem for such an occation.
    I was living a nightmare while i was a kid...i guess it still haunts me..

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This world will keep turning
    New passion will be burning
    And you may stop to wonder, if my love was true
    Remember all my affection
    All the joy I share with you
    And you will know with all my heart, mind and soul
    I will always love you!

    i am sure that u were not aware of the impact such wordings would ever have on someone..not even while writing it...but you are about to change someone forever.

    May God Bless You
    u r an amazing person
    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wondeful write, lovely, lovely!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Nice write!