Deserves nothing but a 5! i love it its just so dark! xxx

Thanx 4 this 1 steph...
i absolutely adore this one, and truthfully, i have had 2 read this one a few times this week, but im sure u saw the scar last week...
i kno i promised i wouldnt... but i was lost steph...
the point is, this one is definatly one of my favs.no doubt.
lylas,
Mal

Good peice, the repition works really well rather than being too strong and ruining the peice (which often happens) you have used it brilliantly the enhance areas and strenghen the overall poem.

5/5

Great job, in a way, the poem is...haunting. Keep it up

Wow...i loved this...i can relate to it...i liked how you kept repeating that one stanza...
"Those Razorblade Memories….
Held so very near
Those Razorblade Memories….
She holds so very dear
Those Razorblade Memories….
That comfort only her
Those Razorblade Memories….
Her friend, her end"
it put a nice touch to it...excellent job...5/5.

A really good dark poem. i loved it