Wow... very deep and very sad. I loved it. Wonderfully penned. 5/5

Nice excerpt. You should write a book. Well do I understand the pain of unrequited love. Wonderful job!!

Such a deep and heartfelt piece. beautifully written. great j0b keep it up!!

l0ve always d0ra

I really enjoyed this poem it relates to a previous relationship I had. Keep up the good work :)

Truly a passionate and sad poem....for reasons I won't go into here, this poem hit a nerve.

This is a awesome poem. Great job love always
Nichole Renee

Wow so intense and full of sadness... this poem got to me in a more personal matter. Its just so full of emotion, loved it!!! Gr8 job!

::MELI::

_Corazon Prisionero_

Hi robert i read ur poem an di liked it alot i aslo read ur profile and it was touching i loved how u expressed ur feeling
5/5
keep up the good work

much luv
asia

Very different from your normal style - but nicely expressed. there's so much raw emotion here and that makes it really a great read.

good luck and peace
shobhana

Lovely......ur expressions wer wonderful dear

gr8 work

Bharti

Heart wrenching poem.. but very well said. Good job!