Very true..wow. You put it so delicately and veyr nice.
My hat goes off to you tainted, you write amazingly and have the kindest heart. There's nothing you can change nor can you control the past or present, but you can make your future.
Although that doesnt guarantee no heart-break...live the life you want to babe.
Love always xoxo

Very deep poem. Excellent use of words. Thank you for your comment.
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5/5. I can't help but stop and hate myself for remembering a thousand 'what if's' that this poem and your thoughts have brought. Every breath I take seems as if I'm fighting time's power over never letting anyone have second chance..everyone has regrets. Your poem was excellent Tainted Mikochan.

Hey i thought that poem was really good...i thought it had a nice flow to it(haha i think that is a better word 2 use hehe lol) nah yeah great 5/5
love camille xo

This poem is very good. i loved it. 5/5
& thanks for your comment!

Wonderful poem tainted, you certainly have a writing talent there, The flow was brilliant no little bits where you thought what on earth, I loved reading it...
"Making the future no longer uncertain
Having a chance to change the past
As the writers, designers of life itself
Now able to make the present last"

Beautiful stanza, well done!
xxx

Wow amazingly written hunn, so true. I too wish that I could turn back time and undo somethings I have done in my past....Baeutiful poem, I loved it!!

Much Love Sabrina

Line 7: breaking
line 9: pour

beautifully done. i like the last stanza. Altering destiny is something that's been on my mind for a while. I think you can do it, with limitations of course. We all wish to return to the naivety & simplicity of being a little kid again, but embrace that you'll always be a kid in heart, just love today for all its worth.

love,
Heather.