Well, that's certainly pessimistic.
You are correct in the fact that we all end up dying , regardless of our actions here on Earth, but, being a firm believer in karma, i believe what we do in life can justify the good or bad that may plague us. Regardless, keep strong.

Love
Heather.

Great peom...

Short but powerful. Loved it. And it's so true. Well done sweety, love you -xxx-

Hmmm.
I have to say that this poem is just thought provoking...
And i have to admit..
it takes a lot to make me think..
thanks!
XD

5/5

I liked it, it kinda shows a message to everyone who reads it. Great job!

It a super poem. short and yet very powerful and brings across a very powerfull and clear message. however i must say i dont think that you r reali someing up in a fair way, sure life seems like that sometimes, well most of the time really but the thing is it does have its good points too. i mean atm as far as im concerened i feel so much like your super poem but i no there is gd in life i mean my earliest poems can tell ppl that. anyway i loved the poem and i can reali relate to it but i guess what im trying to say is that if i can carry on figting and smiling so can u so smile and fight it and never gove up, ever. well em enough with the pep talk.lol. take care and good luck. a defenite 5 btw.

Lovely poem
great selection of words
5/5
love
amy

So much truths behind these lines. Something I can relate to. Short yet powerful. Anyway, wanna say a thank you for your comments on my poems. Greatly appreciated. =)

I read a inspirational poem about how we're all the same and this is a definate contrast *that's the word, right?*

I think you could have gone more in depth but the word choice was decent as well as the organization and flow.