Hidden feelings

by ericbow   Feb 16, 2006


How can i tell?
how can you feel?
this hidden feelings
that is oh, so real.

What must i do?
tell me what to do.
to convince that
cold heart of you.

That lying to you
i will never dare.
holding your heart
i will always care....

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  • 13 years ago

    by ericbow

    Nice... thanks! It such an honor to be praised by an excellent writer like you. hope to read a lot from you. Again, thank you very much!

  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    Hiding what you feel has got to be the worst feeling there ever was. We'd like to say "live for the day!", but I think it's only simple to say, not do. A great write, I like the formation in the each stanza, it looks very tidy.