Comments : Dont Let This Dream Fade Away

  • 18 years ago

    by innocentcrybaby

    This poem is beautiful...it really tells what we feel when we dream about love and hate it to fade...its nice..

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I wish I could describe you
    You're nothing but a dream
    Leaving me so empty when I wake up
    With only a feeling to scream

    I would sleep forever
    Just to dream you again
    Oh, can't you come to me
    To free me of this pain?
    *************************
    dont think of sleeping forever as i hv this intuition in me...ur dream has to come true for sure...i hv been feeling in ur last couple of poems the way u hv fallen for a very lucky guy.. :o)
    hope u guys to be together soon forever.
    lovely poem indeed

    take care and all the best
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by EmptyEyes

    This is such an awesome poem.
    I need to fall in love...sigh...

  • 18 years ago

    by AmBiE

    This is a really good poem girl..i can relate alot to it...perfect

  • 18 years ago

    by AmBiE

    This is a really good poem girl..i can relate alot to it...perfect

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Hi Michelle
    lovely bit of work here. i love the title - it draws the reader into the poem so beautifully and each stanza justifies the beauty of the title.

    sorry haven't been commenting of late on your work!

    thanks as always for your encouraging comments on my work!

    love and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Amazingly written. i dun0 if dats a w0rd. l0lz =p great j0b. t0uching lines..

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This was a great poem! I loved the second stanza! I've felt similarly so nice job!
    Charisma*