I like your inlikely metaphores...
"I can swim across the desert
And climb the highest cloud"
Keep on with this.

Hey darl a heartfelt piece beautifully written very t0uching keep it up

l0ve always d0ra

This poem is amazing and u need to let him go...he aint good 4 u...but what do i know...i aint there so i can c how he really treatz u....even if u go with him...u will never forget about ronaldo and u know that...he is your only one and he will never leave ur heart...but girl idk what to say....about me?? well chriz is thiz guy...he was my valentinez...ohhhh smak...well he makin me 4get about miguel and thats the good thing about it we WERE goiin to get together but nooooo...he has to listen to rumorz...but itz whatever...well get online...i been on 4 like 2 dayz and u never THERE...well te quiero mucho mamita....byez

With one kiss form your lips
I can reach up to the sky
I can walk across the waters
With just one look from your eyes

soulful, like lyrics from a sad poem. every word just vibrates with feeling and emotion. life is about dancing in the rain girl, not waiting for the storm to pass, so let him go like precious kizez says. everyone loves you whether you like it or not.

Absolute perfection!! I love the last stanza. It says everything that needs to be said. Incredible!

Great work! It was emotional and heartfelt. You did an amazing job! I hope that everything works out between you and him. 5/5
p.s. you may want to review again for typo / spelling... unless it was intentional.

Oh my god your poem is amazing. It really relates to how i feel at the mo. Its just spot on, how spooky. Anyway just wanted to say great poem

That was so beautiful...I felt every line with my soul..thats a wonderful poem...

Innocent Crybaby*

I wanna say something bout it but i kant kuz i kant figure out wha to say...haha 5/5

This poem is awesome. . i really like it. . i don't see why it's not rated a 5 through and through. . it's great. .. your awesome. . what more can i say. . .:D thanks. . check out my work sometime. . .
thanks
amber (lifetimecowgirl)

Wow, I really like this, it is amazing.
5/5 definetly.

Wow.. this poem was really great. And I know exactly how you feel. Going threw exactly those feelings for the moment with a guy. Oh well.. just wanted to tell you that I loved this poem. 5/5.

That was beautiful...i have nothing else to say except that!!!!5/5

Oh my goddd, you are amazing, end of story.. PLEASE KEEP WRITING POETRY LIKE THIS..PLEASE everytime i come on this site, i go straight to you, and see if you posted any more poems, i love your poems, they are always so touching, and have so much emotions and feelings, omg..YOU have A LOT of talent.. well just was stopping by to say thank you, for all of your wonderful poetry you have shared with everyone on this site, i really enjoy it.. With Love..Stephen :)