This is a gorguz poem, it is really good, i really like this poem...=) luv ya Courtney xoxoxo

Oh sammi baby i love this poem its fantasic flows nicely and ur use of words are fab great work honestly hun well done xox sam

Really nice and original. I liked the rhyming scheme you chose it fitted nicely. I got the impression you were sorta telling us a story throughout this, whatever the intention is, it works very well. Nice job :)

So perfect, Sammi, so perfect!!!!!!! I think I'll post this poem on my wall. It reminds me of a guy I used to like in high school. He, coincidentally, has blue eyes. This poem is so wonderful.

Tlkin bout eyes.i like the colour of urs..lol..its tru.....lovely poem huni...yet again 5/5......ur a very talented girl sammi n an amazing friend too.

nami
xoxox