Running On Ice

by Timothy r   Feb 19, 2006


I walk alone in my search for the right path
Never knowing where it will end
Hurtling obstacles and mindless traps
Trying to reach out for you my friend
Desperately clutching for just one strand
You always fall by the wayside
Leaving me in peril to hunt again
To locate that internal place where you hide

I feel like I am running on ice
Your breath I yearn to taste
Wanting to hold you once or twice
I am slipping over and over in one place
Please catch me before I fall too far
Melt the ground beneath my feet
Then the ice wouldn`t be so hard
And our lives together we could lead

© copyright 2006 by Timothy r

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  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I love it! It's simply breathtaking. The flow is superb and the emotion on display through your enchanting words is mesmerizing. Keep it up....
    Love ya~Holly

    P.S. My favorite part is the last four lines.

  • 19 years ago

    by katie harvath

    Omg this was an amazing poem.. I loved it.. saying you did a great job on this is an understatement!

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Sweet! Great work, Tim!

    Running on ice.. very good analogy!

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