Yay yulieth! u made it! good poem!
5/5

WOW brillaint poem..gr8 work...luved it..kep it up tc mwaz luv dia xoxo

Personally i htink you arel ike me i have many poemsl ike this one any many like your other ones its kinda strange reli lol

xxx alex xxx

we must think alike

Aww. I feel bad now. Not that I'd do any of those horrible things, but the thing is...I knew it was happening in the world, all over the place...but I didn't much think of it often. I liked how you expressed your hatred for these doings. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

GREAT..! Such a strong poem! I loved it!
xoxo

Sad but truth ... I like ur words ...Have a nice life !

This was a very intense and touchy topic to write about, but I'm glad you did. It's about time people see what kind of world we are living in today. I found some of your verses were shaky, and the rhymes seemed a little forced, which is too bad because it really messed up the flow, but other part were great, I really liked :

"What kind of father
Hits and drowns his daughter?"

--Steph