I Will

That was just incredible. It's odd b/c usually as I read poems such as those it scares me to think they would actually do something like that but this totally came across as figurative to me or at least not something you're actually threatening. Anyways, great job and I'm looking forward to reading more! 5/5
~Jules

Very powerfull read, to hell with forgivness take them out lol
I really liked it thanx.
Tim

Good poem. Heh, I have a very similar poem. It's a great way to let out anger. Everything was perfect about this poem. It's flow and its format, but I think the imagery was cut a little short.

And:

"Any preference
How I take your life?
For causing
So much pain and strife!"

"For causing" takes everything out of flow. maybe if you get rid of so it will be better.

Great poem

Wow...this poem is short...but extremely good. Good work!