You are correct, there are some parts in your poems that was hard comprehend, but you must remember that you wrote your poem from the heart and anything that was writted from there was never meant to be understood.

I believe this particular poem was meant to be read a loud, and that's exactly what I did.

It's filled with most emotions when read a loud, I wish I could correct your in any ways, but I found no flaws.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Your were certainly correct, I had to read your poem through a twice before I got it all the way. I very interesting laying for your poem. I have enjoyed your style of writing and I am beginning to see your voice echoing through the words printed here. You have a deep understanding of life that I have read through your poems. A powerful poem love.

-Tainted Mikochan

Powerful.
You were right after I read it over again I understond it. Your style writing is different but I like it alot. Great work.

Juls

Wow...=)...wonderful poem! keep up the good work, i enjoy reading it.