Very descriptive and beautiful writting I love that is sets itself apart from the usual cliche poems that are often on this site. Also you managed to create a good poem without rhymeing good job

Wow, that was a nice read! As you had previously mentioned your poems are not for novices, and that is true. I definately enjoyed your upper level poems, it was a nice breath of fresh air. Brillant poem love. I liked the way you spaced you poem, the different sections you divided it into with each section having something new to add to the poem. Nice work!

-Tainted Mikochan

Well done poem. The flow I think could be better but over all this piece that you wrote was great. Keep up the great work.

~Juls~

I really liked this one. I think my favorite part of this poem was this:

Im in a jail
Awaiting jurisdiction
A fair trial
Maybe some agony
Maybe some prejudice
For words
Misinterpreted

That said a lot to me. Keep up the good work because you are really talented.