by kaitlynn Feb 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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If you love me then why are you still filled with those thoughts of her.I love you but if you love her then we done because she isn't me & never can be so leave me.........GOOD-BYE |
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The way you wrote this was very hard to read and could be cleaned up to what I have below. Your punctuation and grammar was off, I felt like this was very rushed. Next time use spell-check and take a bit to look over your piece. Also, try writing in stanza form, it will be much better to read. |