Alone

by Always4You   Feb 21, 2006


No one helps her out;
She feels so alone.
She's in so much pain to survive on her own.
This pain that she feels corrupts her mind.
Through this life, she walks blind.

Doesn't know where she's going or what to do.
God, she needs you; she needs you.
Her faith is slipping; it's falling hard.
Her mistakes are leaving her scarred.

Her precious life is sliding through her fingers.
The thoughts of death still linger.
No one to run to; no shoulder to cry on.
There is no soul she can depend upon.

Everyday, she sits alone, crying her heart out.
Hoping someone will see her in spite of the walls she builds.
Her thoughts are nothing but doubts.
She just wants something in her life to be filled.

So she doesn't feel useless and incomplete.
She wishes to rid herself this pain.
Waving a white flag, she signals a retreat.
Lord, free her life from these thick chains.

Let her know that you're there.
You never once left her side.
On wings, I send many prayers.
Let her know she has no reason to hide.

Give her a reason to open up to her life.
Help her understand that she is who you made her.
Lord, don't let her use a knife to rid herself of her pain.
Give her a clean slate God.
Wipe away her compelling stains.

**Not quite finished...I think it needs something...**

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  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This opeice is well written, good flow and structure and great content.

  • 18 years ago

    by *-*PoisonedSoul~_~

    I agree w/ u. that it seems as though its not quite finished. but i really did love it. especvially:

    Her precious life is sliding through her fingers.
    The thoughts of death still linger.
    No one to run to; no shoulder to cry on.
    There is no soul she can depend upon.

    ive been through that again and again. actually i hust always think about it. good job 5/5
    pssst; i added u to my favorite authors thing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I like this poem, well done

  • 18 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    Very sad, but well written..my only suggestion again is the same..Try to let your words flow..dont force em..theres no need for it..Let the rhythm take the words dont force it
    Great job..and greatly expressed
    5/5
    ~The Broken Man~