Well, all i can say is wow.
I have read all of Emily D !ckinson's poems, including 650
you have surpassed that one.
I don't know quite what gets me... into your poems but maybe your word use and short but meaningful lines have in depth meanings that we can never quite decipher...
But it is incredible.
5/5 once again
This is a very good poem, its short, but you really made it work. I love the meaning behind it. You did a very wonderful job on this, your word usage was really good and the flow and rhythm of it was really good also. Great job on this!
Your use of words is very effective.
Cute lil poem. Now I cannot comment on the style as I have a hard time writing in this style..so I think you did really well. Again you use uncommon or original words wich makes it a pleasure to read.