Well said! Lovely poem indeed, especially the last stanza.
Hope you get to feeling better...Holly

Luanne... This is outstanding. An important message I've wanted to say for a long time, you've said with a wonderfully written poem. I agree with Sunny, the way you've blended in sland phrases into your poem really made this one stand out! Amazing work :)

Luanne, this is truly an amazing poem! The flow and your choice of words is incredible! I love it, awesome write! ;o)

Beautifully written ....well done....

love ya, Ann

Wow!!! I really love this!!! This is exactly how I feel sometimes!! Especially with my new poem New Birth. It seems like no one is interested, and I thought it was pretty good. If you have the time do you think you can read it? If not that's ok! 5/5!!!

Sunny said it..the flow was awesome in this peice Luanne! I wrote poems about this too but to bad them people won't take the time to read it! I hate it too cyber mommy! It is so unfair really how some creative and new styles of writing get shot down! Beautiful write LuLu (I saw in that e-mail that was one of your nicknames lol) I love yas!
Chels

Wonderful poem with a wonderful message. I love it
~neens~

I really love this!!! This is exactly how I feel sometimes

Wow! I really love this poem to pieces! Its so truthful! I hate it when poeple downvote just because.... Everyone has their own talent in writing and it should be appreaciated. Yup yup! It happened to one of my poems, i had bout 47 votes with all fives and then all of a sudden someone downvoted moi lol! I actually laughed, twas amsuing. meh!

Anywas, this was one poem that needed to be said and you said it wonderfully! This poem is one message that everyone needs to know.

The flow and rhytm is very well done. And the use of slang was just perfect. Made me smile. =D Very creative! Keep up the amazing work! 5/5

~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

That was hot well done.