A great poem!! =)

Ann, what a beautifully written poem. So sad, yet a wonderful ode to the feelings within.

Oh so touching, so deep and... WOW! A lovely write Ann!

So sad and beautiful, wonderfully done Ann!

I never get tired of reading your poems
because they are so well written....5/5

Shelby

Short, sweet and beautiful. I love this!

This is so sad and touching. Beautiful write!

Wow, perfect score on this one. well done ann.

Ann that makes me sad! :(,,,,,everyone says its so sad and beautiful (true it is), but they need to read deeper within your words, if and so you were talking about you, you should be comforted..I hope you are ok, this poem gives signs of pain my cyber mommy...*hugs*....but you know, I think everyone has invisible tears, there is always something someone don't know....I did like this write tho...different, unique, super!
Love always
Chelsey

This poem's so amazing, just like you! I love it...so sad yet so touching... just wanted to stop by and read your amazing poetry. Take care my friend.

This is a very good poem!Great job!

Absoultly beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Great poem! I can really relate to it! I really liked the 3rd and 4th stanzas, and I loved the line "Memories live forever, dreams never go away" So true, beautiful. Keep it up!!

Anne, all your writings are perfect, along with this one. it's very sad, but it's very very well written. you work inspires me, and i'm sure it inspires thousands of other young poets. amazing work..

Beautiful...5/5

Beautiful...5/5

I loved it....great job.

Hey this is like my poem unseen tears i wrote like 2 yrs ago. thats is freaky

Hey dude, this is such a great poem. I dont want to sound like a girly man lol but this is a great poem, and i feel your pain. You aren't the only one who has felt this before and i love how you express not just yourself but your entire relationship with whoever this figure the poem is about. I loved this and its very touching.......keep writing some stuff plz lol i want to hear more

Your poem is sad but I can relate to it. Great job!