Comments : Make Me Perfect

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Theres no such thing as being too far for being saved, remember that. People that love you will help you get through this tough time. dtay strong hunn

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Great work. There is no such thing as "perfect" though. Its just how society today wants and strives for people to look like. I dont know you but I think you have people that love you for just who you are today in Mind and Body. Keep writing your great at it.

    ~Juls~
    P.S- I know some things about ED's and know of some hotline numbers if you wish on seeking help. Just email me sometime. *God Bless*

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    This is really good...and sad.

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Hey sweetie..a very good but sad poem.
    I agree with Juls, there is no such thing as perfect, everyone wantd to change how they are in some way or another..im sorry that you got involved with ED but really it's never too late, and never too far gone.
    There's people out there/here that love u..hold on and i truly hope you'll try to make it through..and see the beauty you're blinding from yourself.
    luv anna xoxo

    PS: sorry if that alls eemed preachy..didnt mean it to:P

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Wow...amazing poem...
    but i have experienced eating disorders...and i know you don`t feel this way now, but you CAN be saved. it takes a lot of work but it can happen.
    good poem again
    -lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow girl, ur like writing what i fee; but cant put into words! this is amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Waht's ED ?

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    This is so great. i totally connect to it. you really have way with words. don't ever stop writing. your too good at it!!!! i loved this. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Daze

    Again, sad poem but from the heart, about personal issues, i reall believe that the media is to blame in making girls feel this way, and we get caugt up in it and I am sorry this is happening to you. but as for your poem, it wasn't the best poem I've read, I think as a writer you could of done it better, but i id read that they were just toughts you were having and needed to get them out, so i'm glad you find poetry as a way of letting out your feelings, I did enjoy reading your poetry, all of it, and appreciate your honest comments as well. hope to read more of your poems soon.

  • 18 years ago

    by J.C.

    Sometimes circumstances make us feel as though things are impossible. I think that you can do whatever you put your mind to. Based on the things I've read in your poems, there's something inside you that refuses to die. Something that fights to survive. I don't know what ED is, put if its not too serious, I believe you can overcome your weight problem. I believe in you and I hope one day you will too.

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    "I know that I will never measure up
    To her perfect body and mind
    But I just can't be the one to stop
    Seeking for perfection, so hard to find"

    ^^I understand completely...I have hated the way I look for so long and I cant help but see the worst in myself, but Im lucky to have friends who tell me otherwise or else I probably would have resorted to worse things...excellent write!

    Brooke<3