Torn.

by unknown   Feb 23, 2006


Confess to these lies.
that i tried so hard to hide.
only if you knew why i cryed these tears.
you would know why i have these feelings of fear.
i wish you could save from where i belong.
the depths of hell await for me in a sorrowful song.
but you cant .for my soul is unredeemable. it is to far gone to be saved.
I'm sorry . for bathing you in this pain.
I'm sorry .
i tried to hide those terrible unforgivable things.
I'm sorry nothing can be said to help you understand .
i wish i could go back and take the sins away.

but i can't

my love for you was born.

and now it remains. torn.

into 2 . for love and hate

its all now up to us. its our fate.

what will you choose?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wolf

    It's A so-so ,i dont know,it sounded a bit like a pop song to me ,sorry for saying that i'm not trying to be an ass
    put you know,you included (baby)(my love) that were a bit of a turn-off
    and i felt the last line needs to be a little more powerfull
    overall it's good but im very needy in poems

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