That was one hell of a poem i could never think about writing that one but still your a poet that was excellent great job keep it up

Other great poem. Keep up the amazing work and I cant wait to read more.

~juls~

Another brilliant poem love, full of the same emotion and power that was in your other poems. It is fulled with deep feeling about life and death . . . I can really feel you through this poem and my heart goest out to you as you feel this way about life. Again, I have two poems I would like you to read that may help change your persepective, but only if you have the interest, they are Leaving me Behind and Suicide Through Someone else's eyes. More hugs and best of luck to you hunni.

-Tainted Mikochan