Comments : People We Never Meet

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, Bill! This is awesome! I especially love the first and second stanza's and the rhyme made it flow oh so smoothly! I love it, excellent write!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~* gifted little fallen~*

    I like it :) sheck out some of my writes sometimes.... maybe you'll find something you like.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Dark and passionate... Superb writing Bill!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay27

    I like this a lot bill, particularly the opening few stanzas. well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Geez Bill I can't even find the words to say what a powerful punch this write has....
    My jaw is still hanging ...

    Wowzers Bill you have incredible talent , my friend ....but I don't think I have to tell you that , your writings always speak for themselves.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow =0 Very well done. It's more then just excellent hehe. Lotsaaa love -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Klair27

    This is such an amazing poem... It really knows how to show what you feel

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Awesome Bill...so much talent you have.

    love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Huh, that's pretty different. But I like it, you always have a unique way to write... Great poem Bill. Take care 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Bill,
    "Nothing To Fear" wow, so powerfully written. Gosh I wish someone would write something like that for me. What a lucky lady to have that much love from you! Perfectly written, simply breathtaking!

  • 18 years ago

    by ..eliSa*

    Bill i must say u are a very talented writter, so talented that it makes me think twice about my work!! but thats a good thing because it gives me a chance to realize that i always have room fo rimprovment. great work bill, realy..keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cesar

    Dude i love it good you touch me

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Compton

    Wow isn't it amazing how some of the darkest poems can be the most marvelous and meaningful? good job, keep writing, you have talent.

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Lovely Bill.........
    very touching poem 5/5

    Bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    I think the doctor's right, Issues! Seriously though, great poem, very scary though. 5/5
    Helen

  • 18 years ago

    by david lopez

    Man that was very good keep writting man