Wow, Bill! This is awesome! I especially love the first and second stanza's and the rhyme made it flow oh so smoothly! I love it, excellent write!

I like it :) sheck out some of my writes sometimes.... maybe you'll find something you like.

Dark and passionate... Superb writing Bill!!

I like this a lot bill, particularly the opening few stanzas. well done.

Geez Bill I can't even find the words to say what a powerful punch this write has....
My jaw is still hanging ...

Wowzers Bill you have incredible talent , my friend ....but I don't think I have to tell you that , your writings always speak for themselves.....

Wow =0 Very well done. It's more then just excellent hehe. Lotsaaa love -xxx-

This is such an amazing poem... It really knows how to show what you feel

Awesome Bill...so much talent you have.

love Ann

Huh, that's pretty different. But I like it, you always have a unique way to write... Great poem Bill. Take care 5/5

Bill,
"Nothing To Fear" wow, so powerfully written. Gosh I wish someone would write something like that for me. What a lucky lady to have that much love from you! Perfectly written, simply breathtaking!

Bill i must say u are a very talented writter, so talented that it makes me think twice about my work!! but thats a good thing because it gives me a chance to realize that i always have room fo rimprovment. great work bill, realy..keep it up!

Dude i love it good you touch me

Wow isn't it amazing how some of the darkest poems can be the most marvelous and meaningful? good job, keep writing, you have talent.

Lovely Bill.........
very touching poem 5/5

Bharti

I think the doctor's right, Issues! Seriously though, great poem, very scary though. 5/5
Helen

Man that was very good keep writting man