Comments : Another Day

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    5/5 This is great!! I think about alot of the things you've mentioned in this poem, Like "While friends are out having fun, I sit at home alone trapped inside my mind."
    Very good poem, Keep it up =]

    - luv natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Great work. I see you are new to the site and Im just glad to see a another great poet has joined and is willing to share their work. Its a great poem, I was kinda sad when it ended though I was getting so caught up into it. Keep up the great work

    ~Juls~

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Hey beautiful, I send hugs. From this poem it seems that you are a cutter, which is a hard place to be, so I send all the love in the world, that is the life I am running from with everything that I am. I have been a cutter and it almost took my life on several occasions. I am not stranger to it's sweet addiction and to spending sleepless nights crying hour after hour wondering if I will see the sun rise. A poem I want you to read if you have time, and if you have an interest is Sorry is Never Enough. That poem part of my story love, and I hope it will help you reconcider cutting. If you want a friend or someone to talk to I am all ears hunni. Nice, expressive, powerful poem.

    -Tainted Mikochan