This is a really good poem def has my 5 vote take care hun sarah x

Such beauty and an amazing metaphor that is so brilliant to think about. The way you've put this poem togethor is fantastic.

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Sondos

Excellent poem, very unique! I especially love the fourth stanza, great job!

Awesome poem. I like your rhyming scheme. It's a common one, but there are few people that can use it so well. I know I can't . This poem is so awesome. I also like how you tied in the ending of the poem with the title. Cool. Good stuff.

Kim, this is a very good poem. I am so glad I made you join!!! I get to read some really good poems from you :D

Nice flow, emotively powerful...definitely made me feel the pain...

Wow gr8 work again i like ur work. it has so much detail, it really paints a picture. anyway, 5/5again

Wow. simply. amazing.

Aw its really sad.. anyway good choice of words! keep up the good work!