Omg dis is so sad....im reli sori..:'( dis poem made me cry..kep it up..love dia mwaz xoxo.

Damn babe,,i never knew..im so sorry

An amazing poem
sad but a great read, never the less.
sounds like a troubled time.

Well done on a great poem though.

**smile**

That touched me. I am sorry that had to be true! Keep up the good writing. :\

yours always,

theunknownchild

Really beautiful! really sad. amazing poem. well written.

Oh my gosh! This honestly made me wanna cry i mean losing someone you were that close to is always heartbreaking i went thru the same thing but having them die in your arms im so sorry