Woooww.... i honestly can't find words to make your poem justice.......

Tony this poem is really good. i like it alot and thanks 4 your comments

Wow, I really liked this poem, really a lot. Gets 5/5 from me. Keep up the good work.

-Tainted Mikochan

I had to read it a couple of times but I don't think I understood each bit but thats just me in another world right now...I liked what I understood even though it might have not been what you were putting out. I like this poem though better then the first one I read so I'm excited to read some more...good job your a great writer.

Absolutely wonderful. love your style.

That was absolutely beautiful, and i loved the structure of the poem. you are really tallented!

I love how perfectly smoothly it all fits. i love it. amazing writing.