I loved it. Keep up the good work. You are really talented. *5/5*

Wow. One of the better poems I've read today. "Your song in my memories is what I fear
I hear it in my heart, I taste it in my tears" Such a beautiful line!!! Tasting tears making you remember about your lost love. The rhyming and flow all worked. Execellent poem!!!

"The voice of love speaks to me
singing to deceitful melodies"

Those lines are so perfect! Nicely done!

I like the poem and can relate what it is talking about. Keep up the good work.

This is a very good poem, and i loved the meaning. the first line is my favorite. but theres part in this poem that seem a little forced or dont flow.

"My sins will come back to haunt me, they'll get me soon
And there's nothing I can do"

"I now know there's but one thing to do
And that's to get rid of you "

for some reason the sentence structure was confusing, so i had to go back and read it again. that was really the only thing. it was a very good poem. keep writing 4/5

I really love this poem, especially the 3rd stanza such originality in your work

Sondos

This is amazing. so adorable. love it.

You are such a good writer..
i love your poems!

5/5 It was awesome! I love the last line, "And that's to get rid of you" So good! =]

natz x0x

Your poetry shows a lot of emotion - The last line really does strike out at the reader :)

Peace. [Sole]

Haunting poem about letting go - and the hardships of love
Great :D

Awesome Poem. I loved it. Very well written peice of poetry. Good Job!

~Joe~

This was really good also. And the last stanza really brought it together. But in the first stanza, It felt a bit shaky, You had 3 very long lines, and then a short one. Maybe in that last line you could say "And there is nothing that I can do" Just to stretch it out abit. But other then that. I loved it. Really enjoyed reading it, Keep it up 5/5

`taleee xx

Wow! that was excellent! the rhyming worked well and there was again plenty of emotion! keep it up!