Very very good. i love it, theres a mix of emotions it in that really makes it work. nice job

Beautiful intense and lovely...
5/5
its true what is best for us and others actually feels like the last thin we wanna do but somehow life goes on eh ?
i hate this damn life.,.. cant it go my way :-(
thanks for ur comments
love
amy

Oh my god. Wow i loved it. i was just amazing. i am speachless. nice job.
Emma 5/5

I loved the last part of the poem. it was writted pretty well....at the begining things got a little wordy so I had to read it over but other then that it was really good.

Like Julie, I had to read the start over, but the end flowed beautifully, great piece, very well written, and the rhymes are great too - very subtle.

Peace. [Sole]

Really sad, but you convey your emotions really well in this one, again, good work!

Sad story. I know how you feel. Sucks when you expect this great thing to happen in your life, and it gets close to that time, and it never comes to pass. Great poem. Keep writing.

I like this one also. your talent is great and never forget it. Your poetry is alot different to the usual ones I read. So full of life and make a great read :)

Aw that poem is really sweet. You did a great job at pouring out your emotions on this & the flow & rhythm of it went along well. Great job on this! I loved it!

Sometimes what makes sense isn't always the easiest path to take. I loved your poem. Beautiful write.

Awww so sweet, you should so much emotions you could tell it came straight from the heart... you got talent 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

A beautiful poem. hwoever, i found i was never sure of teh rhyming pattern

i liked the pattern you had here it was very clever.

your use of language was exellent

Ruby

Another wonderful piece to read. The use of direct speech made it more life like and accessible to readers. Excellent.

[lost_laureate]

This beautiful! very sad.. very good use of language yet again! nice job!

Very good poem not sure if it was because i wasnt' focused on the poem or not but i think you had a few flow problems but only minor ones

Aw!!! This was very sweet!! It had alot of emotion so you could tell it came straight from the heart!! The flow was a bit rocky!!! Other then that Great poem!! 5/5!! Keep it up!!

This poem went from Sad, to happy, to sad. =( I thought things were going to turn out good and you completely changed things around on me. :(

Good poem. :) The flow was a little rocky at times but it was good.

>black&&blue

Aww. It's sad =(

The flow was a bit rocky in parts, but it kind of varied out in the end. I liked the topic a lot. It reminds me of my life and a bit of what I'm going through. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I'm sorry to say, but this grew harder to read with each stanza... It was like every other love poem in the book and it didn't even bother to flow...

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

Wow a very long poem. took me forever to read lol. but you did a great job on it. i really like it a lot. it's really sad, but wonderfuly written. keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina