Hey hun, this was a very sad poem with a lot of expression and a sad tail to tell and I life similar to my own story. I send you hugs, because right now that's all I can do. Scars will be with your forever and when you glue a broke heart there are still cracks, but those marks are a reminder of how far you have come. I heart goes out to you.

-Tainted Mikochan

That was awsome. *5/5*

This is one of my favorites by you

this stanza was really cool:
"How do you save me?
When I've fallen so far
How can you heal these wounds
Which have turned to scars?"

but this poem was great over all as well
you did a really good job this time

Excellent poem,very well written.

Great poem, i feel the same way, but i couldnt put in words so great as yours.
5/5

Wow! Honestly, I wasn't that into it until the end. I loved it! Those are some damn good questions that I've come to realize...most can't answer!

Im really sorry. I hope everything turns out okay and gets better. Keep writing.

I feel actually the same way....i really love this poem

Exactly*

Wow, that hits close to home. I ask myself this alot, and never get an answer. I suppose you could try and find something that makes you smile. And hey at least you've never given up, seeing as you're still here. *hugs* take care XXXXX
JL

Omfg that is the greatest poem i think i have ever read it al flows so well keep it up i love it nice writing

Omfg that is the greatest poem i think i have ever read it al flows so well keep it up i love it nice writing

A powerful poem, 5/5 keep writing, and i hope things turn out for the better :-). *smiles*

Wow i know exactly how u feel... like right when u wake up it hits u, and it hits hard and u wonder why u even get up and go thru ur day... thx for puttin it into words

Excellent it was so real and full of emotions. it really explains alot and gives the full explanaion of the title.

Beautiful! My favourite part was:
"I just want to be held close
But I know I'll push everyone away
I'm too scared to let anyone in
Because I know no one will stay"

I'm sorry you feel that way though :(
*hugs you*
Take care dear and stay strong, not for the others but for yourself.

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

Its really good

Damn this ROCKS!! u almost got me in tears over here!! well yea i no how u feel!!! i can relate too this!! awesome job!! keep up the EXCELLENT WORK!! 5/5 for sure!! and check out some of my stuff sometime if u want!!
x0x0
kandie!!

Hey babe!
I love your poem! You have a LOT of insight and I know that that is the life the 2 of us live in right now! It's not great but we have to remember that we will ALWAYS have eachother by our side!! ily lots!!

I feel the same.
thats all i can say.
i know i need help but i cant
i seems whenever i do i push poeple away.
thankyou.
i know i am no longer alone
gretski