Comments : City Of Dreams

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Tim,

    This is a deep look at the harsh relaities of our society today. The gap between rich and poor are so wide today. the have-nots far out weigh the have's. Aloot to make one think about.

    Best regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Reality hits, and the world is caught off guard. This is absolutely incredible!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, another amazing poem! I love your life poems so much! Truly incredible and straight forward, but so darn sad. Reality bites!

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    This is a truly beautiful poem. Deep and thought provoking. Great job
    5/5
    Breanna