Comments : Match, Point

  • 14 years ago

    by Leighann

    Wow this is really good.. i like how you used the comparison.. nicely done

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wow, what a write, great job Kaitlin!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet

    U really no how 2 write

  • 12 years ago

    by Kyle

    I loved the last two lines.
    Your comparison was incredible.
    The words you chose to portray such a brilliant picture were quite impressive.

    5/5