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Wow! This is -excellent-! I loved this poem =)
You have talent. Keep using it ^-^
This is incredible! Amazing!
Hey gurl nice poems i really like it and and i have u on my myspace my name iz Mr. KLown ok well bye
by Robert Gardiner
Nicely done Kaitlin!!!
by Gracie Jo
Another really good poem. I like your style a lot. 5/5
by Kane Burden
Excellent poem, i love how the story is portrayed in first person.. You feel like you are standing right between the two lovers..
i reckon this was a great poem but could perhaps benifit from some better word usage and more complex rhymes. Just a thought :)
It was a brilliant poem though, and your use of tense was consistant.
I would appreciate a comment back?
Awesome poem, you're truely a great writer
What a wonderful poem! that's top notch in my book. pretty close in style.