Comments : Foretold

  • 14 years ago

    by Phoebe

    Wow! This is -excellent-! I loved this poem =)
    You have talent. Keep using it ^-^
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is incredible! Amazing!

  • 14 years ago

    by Unknown

    Hey gurl nice poems i really like it and and i have u on my myspace my name iz Mr. KLown ok well bye

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely done Kaitlin!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Another really good poem. I like your style a lot. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Excellent poem, i love how the story is portrayed in first person.. You feel like you are standing right between the two lovers..

  • 14 years ago

    by Stacey

    Hey,
    i reckon this was a great poem but could perhaps benifit from some better word usage and more complex rhymes. Just a thought :)

    It was a brilliant poem though, and your use of tense was consistant.

    I would appreciate a comment back?

    Stacey

  • 14 years ago

    by Tyler

    Awesome poem, you're truely a great writer

  • 8 years ago

    by silvertung69

    What a wonderful poem! that's top notch in my book. pretty close in style.