Desperate Dawn

by Weeping Wolf   Mar 1, 2006


Born into endless night
I've learned to be lonely
and never knew the day would come...
Desperate Dawn- rise up to my shore
I was blindly breath-taken to see
That for once in my dark life time
you remembered me...i can't believe..

Desperate Dawn- your beauty collides with the stars
I look up and see you, running, dancing amoung them
The day i finally woke up and stopped chasing time
Could I ever forget this sunrise? will you ever know
i will remember you till the end, in my darkest hours
you have at long last risen, my desperate dawn.

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  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Beautiful descriptions of words and great dition. well done on this one.

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by charles

    Excellent work it brings me the reader into the poem and the discriptive language is just wonderful and smooth.

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Cool! I love it :) the first 2 lines did it for me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Unrequited

    My Layla... so talented.
    "Desperate Dawn- your beauty collides with the stars"
    oh how i love this... but love you even more.

    keep up the excellent work, my dear.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katt

    Yeah I better be your desperate Dawn!
    Great poem lala! Your the bomb!

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