A lot of reality poems being written... You've written a very sad poem that hits home... Sadly it's the way the world is today. A very great poem, with a deep and open message! Great writing Luanne :)

So powerfully sad, Luanne! Incredible topic to write on and you did it so beautifully! Awesome message!

Very good poem. The message is to true. It is so sad that the world is this way. I don't have any children of my own, but I do have several that have adopted me. I love kids, they are our future, and so many people forget that. Wonderful poem. Very powerful.
~neens~

I love you Luanne you are such a sweet person to sit down and write a poem like this for those who were taken..its so sad and your right about your children never being safe enough..sad isn't it? Everyday I wake up with fear in my head (no lie, sometimes I'm afraid of my own home)....I run down my hall when I'm home alone scared someone is chasing me lol its a funny picture but i am a fearful child and I always watch my back wherever I walk!....This is so sad Luanne yet a nice dedication to those who were kidnapped and those parents who have children who were taken from them! Nice again cyber momma!
Love alwways
Chelsey a.k.a..A.I.D

A wonderful realistic and heart touching poem, well done luanne!

Awwww Luanne....this does bring sadness to our hearts.....happens just to much to innocent kids. What a beautiful heart you have and you're precious....great write with such truth....I couldn't imagine the pain those parents feel and the fear within those kids....This touched me deeply, a sad, sad thing....

How did I miss this one? Not sure, but this is an awesome piece. Written beautifully about such a horrifying subject.
Well done, take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow, this is an amazing poem. So sad yet full of emotion. And the meaning is so true, I get so sad when i see posters up for missing children. Its horrible.

I liked your poem alot, it had alot of depth and the flow and rhythm was very well done. Keep up the awesome work!

P.S. Yes I do live in kanata tee hee! YAY! I finally know someone who lives near me as well, woot woot! =D Thats so awesome! Nice to meet ya! lol! And thank you for your comment meant a lot! Anyways don't stop writing, ever! =D

~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

You are a new edition to the Hall of fame for poets...... Congradulations!

Love your poems 5/5

Awwww ur so nice! i get sad when they are missing to, when i have children my kids are gunna b overly protected, theyre gunna hate me, lol. anyway wow amazing work again. 5/5

This strikes so close to home with me, because I am so petrified of some stranger kidnapping my child. You see the news and all these missing children and it puts fear into your heart. I'm so overprotective with my son and he hates it, but with the predators out there you have to be.
Very well done.