Beautiful Reality (a Dream)

by RadianceInReverse   Mar 3, 2006


Sweet whispers in the wind
loving words of caress
a wonderful flowing dress
heart beating for a love so deep
fingers laced within hands so soft

I can hear the rustle of the autumn leaves
sounds so soft like the twinkle of a falling tear
color glistening off such sweet design
sight correctly given and so divine
a bloom so new, like an early dew
Love so gentle, kiss as sweet
sent me spinning into a dream so deep

Mind wondering out to sea
dancing, my head against his chest
I can hear his breath slowly flowing from his lungs

This beautiful flow ending, so fast
the hour 12 is over past
our love melting the time away
in his arms ill forever stay
Gentle kiss placed upon my shaking lips
cheeks blushed, in his hands my face is held

Heart a flutter
stomach twisting like freshly churned butter

Sun is rising
as our time alone is ending
tired eyes, as our bodies awake
lying together all through the night
eyes opening to his glowing face
departing with a kiss
beautifully ending a night of heavenly bliss

Mind regained...
I hear a voice so soft
as my mind comes back to me
I look at your face so calm
and realize.....

This Dream Had Become A Beautiful Reality!!

This is a dream..about being with the one you love and dancing the night away...it has no sexual meanings.....Please Comment..Joc

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  • 13 years ago

    by Ares

    I agree that this is a very nice poem and I loved the imagery that it created.

    What threw me off initially was the mixing of rhymes, the beat and how you sorta switched language in the middle of the poem. It's really hard to explain, but I'll do my best.

    I'll read it a couple more times and then I'll send you a message if things are still unclear.

    All in all, a great piece of poetry.

    --ares

  • 16 years ago

    by ILoveRobbie

    This is a beautiful poem.
    I love it!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    To find that true love, makes life worth it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Martin

    I absolutely love this one!

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    As I said in the forums: I loved the twists in what seemed a plot and the ending was beautiful!! GREAT work!! This is a BEAUTIFUL picture of a love from a story. :) 5/5