Comments : I Will Pretend

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Aww hunn..i wish you didn't feel that way..or well that I could do something about it...stay strong..i'm sure you can make it through..yes it will be hard but you can do it....-xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Is this really going on baby? Is this happening to you? Will you talk to me hunni, I don't want to see you fall again. The blade is addiction and it is so wonderful to be thin. but you are strong love and i know you can keep fighting. You are not destined to pretend to be happy for the rest of your life, there is more to life than that for you. Baby, don't give up please please please don't go down that road again. *a million hugs*

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I can relate. love this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow hun that is amazing. I'm sorry you're going through such thoughts...they're hard to escape aren't they?
    I can really relate to this..id even dedicate it to that person..so wow.
    Thankyou so much for your comments hun..ill take you up on that offer sometime for sure.
    Here for u too huni
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    I'm sorry if these are true feelings... please don't pretend to be happy. Life is just a matter of perspective. Tomorrow will be a better day. Great write though. Keep writing... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Gr8 Job
    totally loved it
    keep it up gal
    good luck
    lov
    Nema x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Catch Me If I Fall

    HEY
    THATS REALLY GOOD. YOUR AMAZING...MORE THAN WORDS CAN SAY....THATNK YOU FOR THAT POEM IT TOUCHED A PART OF MY HEART THAT RARLY EVER GETS NOTICED, THANK YOU

  • 18 years ago

    by Daze

    I hide behind a smile and I pretend
    To be happy, but inside I'm dying again
    . . . that was my favorite part of your poem, i always like to tell someone which part stood out to me, those two lines stood out me the most because it was powerful to me and showed a lot of truth. You write many sad poetry, but you write it well. I liked this poem but it didn't stand out to me as much, i've a lot like this one before, i would suggest more originality, but a poem should come from the heart, and i keep that in mind when I read people's poetry.

  • 18 years ago

    by imnotlikethem

    Aw..if that's true I'm sorry I went through the same thing.....I have a lot of scars on my arms.....I'm sorry hun.....
    xoxo
    Cassie

  • 18 years ago

    by J.C.

    Isn't it amazing how important one person can be in your life? They can casue you so much happiness and at the same time cause you so much pain.