Taken

by belle163   Mar 5, 2006


I wish you would hold me
whenever i fall
i wish you would kiss me
like you loved me at all

whenever i see you
i can't help but think
what i want is you,
your the missing link.

To think i love you
to think you're what i want
to think all this is true
for you're a man known as "taken."

this is my first poem i have ever written please vote and help me become a better poet.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Sharelle, this is so freakin' good! You are already way better than me and this is only the first poem you've written! *shakes fist at sky* You should definitely write the other four too because yours are amazing!! Keep up the amazing writing hun xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Tr!c!a_s@tanicangel

    Hey there for a beginner this is really good,i totally liked it,keep up the great job.byez.