Lol sounds good.
I thought this poem was cute!
And i also have a sudden hunger for broccoli and cheese. o.O
LoL!

I'm hungry and I just ate. Have fun..

Thanks a lot... now im hungry... :( lol, funny poem. So simple and cute.

Hehe this was cool lol, Made me smile =] And thanx for the comment, And nah it wasnt fictional, It was all true..But anywho 5/5 =]

- natz x0x

Lol it's pretty cool

Cute, I never read a funny poem before but I liked it!

Good write.. i think the ending could use work...
~David

Haha, awesome write. I loved it.

~Joe~

Lol . . . nice write - they should write all recipe books in poetry :)

Peace. [Sole]

Its cute lol.. dunno what elce to say

LoL this made me laugh.. and also made me kind of hungry.. lol. It's really cute. Great job! 5/5*

A short snappy poem making good use of a very limited line length to give the poem a really racy feel to perfectly suit the idea of a very raced meal! Had me smiling from beginning to end. 5/5

Urgg.. wanna eatt! :P haha! and dats strange, cuz i jus ate! lol.. awesum poem! 5/5

Haha. That was cute! I enjoyed it. (=

Haha i liked it you described foods and sounds and steps you use to make dinner lol it made me want to cook haha i enjoyed it!

this is tottaly what i am going through right now.... wow how is your boy taking it though? i love how you tottaly expressed your feelings and still made it sound amazing you have so much talent!

Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

-Laura

Oh sorry about the last part to the past comment the boy part i accidentally added that it was for a differnt poem.....but read the first part of the comment caust its true!!!

Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

-Laura

I thought it was fun, though I might have missed out on what made it funny per se.

Lol, what a meal! mmmm.. lol
I actually don't mind broccoli much, but with cheese, that's a bit pushy. Great write, thank goodness I ate before hand :P

VERY different, but it IS good. Haha. I would have NEVER of thought of writing a poem like that. =D I see you are a very unique writer too. :) Good job.

>black&&blue

Nice! I am really enjoying your writing, I will check back frequently