Comments : The Ghosts of Tomorrow

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Wow... Short, sweet and powerful. I love the layout of this poem and how the stanzes ends with a powerful punch. Great write! 5/5

  • Hey this is great you should try and make a sequel. I know I'd be glad to read it.the first mini paragraph is great.(my personal fave anyways) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Metal_Queen

    Awesome poem Luv Metalqueen

  • 18 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    Very sad poem :) but good :) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    AMAZINGNESS!!!!... if that's a word...
    this poem flows so well, and there words you used were just like... wow!
    great job!!


  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this, it is one of my favourite's of your's so far.
    I thought this piece was very powerful.
    You did a wonderful job with this.

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn

    Excellent poem, it really enjoyed it. I loved this stanza though, it stood out above the rest

    Chained to the floor by hopes and dreams,
    blanketed by sorrow,
    silent screams.

    It flowed so well. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Another great one.. not my favorite.. but still poeticly wonderful.. interesting strucute

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    I loved this verse

    Chained to the floor by hopes and dreams,
    blanketed by sorrow,
    silent screams.

    your poems are really good. you have a true talent

    much love and many kisses,

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Wow, this is one of the best poems that i have read. You are a very talented poet and im going to add you to my favorites list.. lol anyway back to the poem. i thought the flow and rhyme was really good. its sad. kinda short but i write short ones to. you got everything you wnated to say out. Great Job.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    So dark and deceptive, very great, it seems like its straight from the heart

  • I didn't quite get the meaning of the poem. but i could still feel the emotion, the power behinde the phrases. another great piece of work.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Perfect, even flow...between all stanzas...
    reminds me of modern arabic poetry...only with dark meaning...
    depressing really...but moving...
    a definite 5/5...=D

  • 16 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Ohhhhhh creepyyyyyyy!!!! I give you a 5/5... great job... I have about 80 poems of my own if you'd like to read them....

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh wow..sadly beautifully written..veryy Dark..but veryy GooD ..I Luved it
    U have done a great work..very talented give u 5/5 ..u deserve it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, incredible poem, very dark and you expressed emotions greatly. I like the metaphors, powerful atmosphere. Every stanza is so effective and unique and this one has superb wording. Well done!

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hauntingly beautiful. A great write.