Comments : You Broke My Heart

  • I love it babe, i no how u feel so bad im going thru exactly the same thing with josie but babe he is not worth ur tears....i l0ve y0o s0 much

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    I believed you when you said you cared,
    And how you loved me so.
    Well look where that has got me.
    And now I can't let you go.''

    That last line is immense.
    Got quite excetid when its flashed 3 new poems. Course, you didn't dissapoint. Straight from you broken heart. *hugs* Tragic yet beautiful.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by mevstheworld

    Um, who is this guy or girl?? sucks to be them... hahaha... you know if you need sumone to talk to send me an email about it an ill try my best to help you through it you know... you have my care also, try an use it

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    I love it. no exactly how u feel, but u no wt, as far as im concerned today after having my heart broken love can go to hel!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Hun this poem is so sad!! but don't worry! i know you can pull through all this shit. i'm here for you. email me! lyl~lex

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    I know life, friendship and love can be painfull, but it will only be like that up to a sertain point.

    no editinh needed by the way(atleast I think so)

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl p0werful lines. a very heartfelt piece. very well written. t0uching..

    l0ve always d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow.. after reading your poem I felt so much pain so many feeling... I had to write something down.. and I only managed to write four lines down.. which were:

    Someone please call the cops
    Tell her her heart has been stolen
    Tell them that she is shedding so many teardrops
    That her eyes are swollen

    Guess those words are meant for you my dear. But you deserve better words then mine..

    I can't tell you that I loved this poem. I can't tell you that I think it's briljant. Cause it hurts.. Hurts to hear you talk and feel this way.

    Sorry that I havent read this poem earlier..

    And sorry that this is all I can say right now.

    Love you sweety -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    For someone so young like you, you spin beautiful words, full of sorrow, full of truth, and full of beauty. no need to edit this perfect poem. a poetess like you does not ever need to edit. heart-stirring.

  • 18 years ago

    by PuNK lOv3

    That was a really good peom it reminded me when me boyfriend cheated on so i really liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    I loved it, I can totally relate to the feelings portrayed in the poem

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    I know the feeling
    oh lordy i know the feeling
    you did such a good job describing things, i9 really liked this poem