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by Hailey   Mar 8, 2006


Before I take my last breath
I'm gonna free all the pain that i helled in my chest
The ones that ruined my life
Like the hatred especially the lies
That i had for my family and friends
With my smiles and laughs that were all pretend

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxAn Angel With Broken WingsxX

    I Like This...Its Really Pretty!

    • 10 years ago

      by Hailey

      Thanks Glad you enjoyed it

  • 17 years ago

    by Ozzie

    I really liked this, it carried the emotions across well.
    Thanks for the comment, although the sad thing was that I wrote it on my b'day too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fade_t0_bLaCk

    Scratch that last comment. no big deal not everyone can understand and obviously you dont. not gunna hate for it.

  • 18 years ago

    by BeeBeeGun

    Thanks for you comment
    this poem is good well written
    be good to see some more poems :)

    • 10 years ago

      by Hailey

      Hey thanks man

  • 18 years ago

    by asia

    I liked ur poem and i wanted to say thank u for writting me it meant alot good luck

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