Wow. this is powerful and sad. It really makes you think. and I know how weird this is...but it makes me think of Harry Potter nd the Prisoner of Azkaban. lol. cause of Lupin...and yeah. you get it. lol. excellent poem though!
Wow. So much...killing lol. Very dark poem, yes. Great flow and rhymes though. I liked how you described about all the feelings you would feel (if werewolves were real) and how regretful you would be. Great write! =) 5/5 xoxo
Oh my goodness. I LOVE this poem. It's the best one I have read in FOREVER. You have a lot of talent the only thing I see to fix is puncuation marks. take it to a teacher(if your in school) english of course. or someone who is good at editting.
Wow, that was exelennt i could imagine perfectly every scean. really good. just one little question though cuz i notiieced it why did he jump through the window after slaming into the door...lol just wondering Great read hope to read more like it soon...5/5