What would i do

by u alwayz made me smile   Mar 9, 2006


What would i do
if i didn\'t have u
i'd be so lonely
lost and wouldn't know what to do

what would i do
if there wasn't an us
i must confess
i wouldn't know wat to do

what would i do
if i was to lose you
honstly i don't have a clue
but my love will alwayz b true

what would i do
if u weren't by my side
i\'d would rather die
cuz i would've lost my pride

i just have to let u know
exactly how i feel
belive me when i say i'm for real

* plz comment i would really appreciate it and i woud return the favor*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kaytlin

    I think this poem is pretty good. It could use more or something else. I don't know exactly though.

  • 19 years ago

    by chelsea

    AWW THIS POEM IS SO SWEET IT REMINDS ME OF MY POEMS!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lauren

    Wow this is like a rap!
    this is amazing. i loved every part of it.
    5/5
    -lauren

  • 19 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    You definetly have rap ability
    i rap too so its kool
    great job
    this also could of done well in the Slang Poem/love section
    great job
    5/5
    keep it up
    ~TBOY~

  • 19 years ago

    by Help_ME

    Awwwww it was so cute keep posting and i will keep reading

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