Beautifully written! i love the last two parts.. great job!!

Fantasy of a dream man..hhhmmm

U know what, sometimes i think we both are going through almost same phase of life and emotions, both of our poems reflect each other as if they are saying something to each other. I don't know i just felt like that. I simply love ur poems, i could feel every word, so deep.

May God Bless You
take care and all the best

Oh, wow!!I know the feeling! This is incredible, incredible, incredible. Oh but it's such a sad dream! Sweet, but sad. Beautifully written!!

hugs and smiles,
Mary

Beautiful job Princess, very nice penn, enjoyed!!!

Congratulations Dear!! I am sure your poems deserve more than this but then everything takes time.

All the best and take care

Lovely.......so sweet......realy loved it!

keep writing dear!
congrats 4 being on the top page!
Bharti..

I love the flow of this poem. it is really nicley written. Great job Hun. Please please please vote and comment on one of my poems.
Love Nichole

YaY that was so sweet!!!!
touching and really heartfelt!
the idea is gr8 also =D
loved it so much
keep it up and thanx for commenting on my poem

An0ther great j0b. that was really g0od. i liked this 0ne t0o. keep it up =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

This is your guy friend.> bet her proud to know that you feel the way you do about him... romeo and juliette...

Great Michelle. seems like i've missed quite a bit of your work and i know i've missed something!

love and peace
shobhana