It is a real beatifully sad poem natz.....its like the tears of sorrow that u shed, the moment they touched paper turned into these beatufiul, yet sorrowfilled words expressing the way U felt to lead u to the end...... it was really mind boggling something that brought a tear to my eye.....

Well done... its really emotional

Another passionate work well done, though I pray this poem isn't the truth about you. I hope you do not feel that way, because that road can never lead to happiness. I've been to the very bottom of that suicide hole, yet somehow I am still alive. In the end of your poem you idenitified no opening up to people as a problem so remember to do that before you want to take you ability to do so away. Hugs love.

-Tainted Mikochan

HeYY NaT .. ur poems are so good .. i wish i could write as good as ya! o and thanx 4 the comment!

Wow, I loved it, I have a poem like that but its not on this site its on another and its won afew awards....I really liked the deepness and power put into it. Good job.

That is incrediable!! u r so talented but that poem was really sad i hope ur happy now, great write. That had so much emotion it made me wanna scream about what things are like its was amazing

WOW...very sad.. i love it, mostly because i can relate to it, i wrote one just like this, its called Just For Love, u can check it out if u want. BUT wow, keep on writing gurl!

I normally get bored with long poems but this one kept my attention all the way to the end!

i love the line 'just like a puzzle i was missing a piece'.

xx

Wow! thats intense but I really liked it. The 10th stanza lost the flow but after you regained the flow back very nicely.
~Juls~

Great poem - that really touched my heart. I hope everythings ok xXx

Peace. [Sole]

Wow, that was a great poem!!! i can relate to the feeling. great poem 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Hey hun that was a really awesome poem it expressed alot and i so relate hang in there hun if u ever want to talk let me now, always xoxo Rach

This is an awesome poem i loved how it expressed feelings and thanks for the comment she hasnt voted yet so i dont know if i have won thanks again
tabby

An emotive yet very very over used poem subject. I have nothing else to say that I haven't already said on many poems by other people on the same subject. Sorry for being so blunt.

I love this
and i know how it feels to not feel good for your whole life
i love it

Very deep, good job!

also thanx so much for the comment

Wow very strong it is great that oyu had enough courgae to write this and post it so that everyone could see it.... 5/5 for you!!

Really good poem i feel like this most days

That was a great poem, very deep. I sometimes feel like this too. Take care!

--*NaydeeN*

Very good poem, touching, in the poem it seems like all the signs were there but no-one noticed......5/5