Beautifully w0rded. a t0uching piece. great use 0f w0rds

Lovely poem, great job, nicely penned!!!

Yet another beautiful poem indeed, great selection of words and u hv xpressed emotions in a beautiful way, just love ur poems a lot.
great work

all the best and take care

Ohh that is such sweet heartfelt poem.
Good job.

take care
chavii.

Wow.....awwwww......that was an amazing piece of poetry girl....5/5.......n thnx for reading my poem twice....sum of the line in ur poetry are unforgetable too....keep up the awsum wrk.......lots of pyaar......sonam

This is so beautiful. It made me smile because it's what I NEED to say to my crush. But...ah well! This poem is so perfect!!

Great poem!! totally know how you feel!! i wanna tell him but i know he doesn't feel that way!! keep writing!

I thought that your poem was great, you used a wide range of vocablary and it was very effective.
Keep it up, it was very thoughtful.
Luv Lucyjade x

I really dont want to be the one to put a damper on these comments but i think u shuld of put more effort into it. its still good tho.

luv ya shez

Heyy bharati ,
i just now saw ur poem is top rated recent poem , greatttt congrats , feeling so happy.

take care
chavii.

Great poem!

Lovely poem Bharti. I can feel the essence of love behind every single word. Keep it up and congrats for this one making it to the top.

Luv
Michelle

I loved this poem. i can definitely relate to it. great job! 5/5*

Wow, truley a master peice. I loved it. once again, don't use slang. instead of 4 use for, instead of u use you...etc. other than that it was an awesome Poem.

GOSH!!! what a wonderful piece!!
I don't regret openin' your profile and viewing your poems ;)
I adore this poem its amazingly written, well expressed!! amazing really!!~~
you're so talented and true!
keep up the great work
Luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x