by Fallen~Tears Mar 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Come pick back up the pieces of my shattered dreams you tore apart |
by Natalie
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Another good one. Cept. 'threw' Should be 'through' And maybe that last line change it to 'I guess this is it, We were never meant to be' What you had there just didnt really fit in for some reason. Still a great poem. 5/5 |
by amanda
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5*****EXCELLENT |
by Lauren
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This is SO true for me. |