Your an excellent poet i loved it cuz it
reminded me of someone... but i gave iit 5/5 keep it up!

Hey good poem. your quite talented.
check outsomeof my poems if you can.
thanx
jess XxX

Love it. i have a poem about this topic or close to it.

That was sad but i can relate to it. great job of putting it into words! 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Aw.. This is sad. I know how hard it is though. But this wasa good poem, Not too long, Not too short, It was just right! Keep it up! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Love it...

Your an amazing poet and its an amazing poem it really relates to people whether they can see or not, I kinda feel bad when I'm jelous bcoz I wanna be happy for them but I guess its just so hard.

Hmm it's ok, I can see there is emotion and feeling in it. That's good. But the flow, try improving it by sorting the work into equal lines perhaps? Dunno, just my opinion.

Too sad and i was enjoyed i can feel the sadness and the emotion w/ this poet it really express what it feels very great!

I know what you were feeling, well in a girls perspective of course. Nice work.

Another good poem, you do have talent. Keep writing!

Wow this is was really good! I know the feeling but its the other way around. I couldn't stand seeing this one guy with his ex who she cheated on over and over again. The thing was he went back to her when me and him were thinking about hooking up. :( But enough of my sad story. I loved this poem! 5/5

The flow in this one is kinda off. All in all it's still a great read. 5/5

marcella

NIcely written with a good free flow and meaning. Keep writing and sharing :)