Trevor

by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ   Mar 14, 2006


When I'm with you your the only one i see
Its magical when your with me!
I love it when you kiss my lips
It sends shivers to my finger tips!
Thanks for the roses and the chocolate kisses
you fulfill all my wishes!
You make me laugh when i am down
Its like you are my own personal clown!
I want what we have to last forever
This is for you a guy named Trevor!

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  • 17 years ago

    by niko

    Awwwww thats so cute! my b/fs names trevor n i feel ezactly like that about him! i love it!
    ~N ! 1< 0~

  • 17 years ago

    by Sondos

    The sentiment is lovely and this reveals some very good imagery if you could make some of the rhyming a little more original it would improve but its very good

    Sondos

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Nice and sweet. very moving. some of the rhymes seemed a bit forced. i really likes some of the ideas within it.

    Ruby

  • 17 years ago

    by Synh

    It was very cute and sweet but it defintely could have been better.

  • 17 years ago

    by Richard

    Would make an adorable hallmark card hehe i loves it 5/5

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